Now comes another lengthy part of the writing process: Revising.
Revising your paper allows you to change the structure of your sentences, rearrange paragraphs, add more detail, and really make your paper into something important. We've worked on revision before by:
- adding appositives
- varying sentence length/type
- using subordinating conjunctions
- expanding and elaborating
After you've looked at my example, you should have a good idea of what your rough draft will look like when you turn it in today, along with your final draft!